Sunday, November 18, 2012

blackwater men- workshop


BlackWater Men is a look into the friendship and development of two Native American boys. The story has a full arc, starting with the boys as freshmen in high school and continuing through early manhood. Making the title very sound. It starts by introducing the blackwater boys, and ends with the blackwater men driving off, never to return. Because it is a longer story it is able to follow the lives of these two boys, though mostly just Fresco, without missing or skipping anything that would be important.
            I think the stakes in this story are very palpable and relatable. The first half is about two kids doing stupid stuff in high school, a period of life marked by stupid decisions. They aren’t killing people or stealing cars, they’re raiding liquor cabinets and smoking cigarettes at parties. Then they move up to harder and more intense crimes, like meth and scamming a casino. It is a logical progression that increases the stakes and possibility of punishment. This ground in reality makes the characters real and relatable, and the events of the story believable.    

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